I should ensure the story has a clear beginning, middle, and end. Maybe start with Lyra's daily routine, the discovery of the hourglass's power, then the challenges she faces. Climax could involve a confrontation with the antagonist, and a resolution where she chooses to either destroy the hourglass or use its power for good. The story should be engaging, with detailed descriptions to immerse the reader in the world.
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